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When my Love slipped away ….

07 Sep 2012 Author 89kg

With tears rolling down my cheeks,
Pain overflowing in my heart,
My love just slipped off my hand.

With sorrow and sadness brimming in my heart,
Sweet pain visibly stinging my eyes,
My girl left for someone else.

With memories lingering in my mind,
Emptiness filling my soul,
My lady walked out of my life.

With numbness spreading through my entire body,
Loneliness reigning my entire existence,
My empress abandoned me insufferably.

With appetite suppressed on my mouth,
Sleep stolen form my eyes,
My darling betrayed me unforgettably.

5 responses to “When my Love slipped away ….”

  1. Kezang Dawa says:

    i can feel your pain…let’s see what comes the next pain…..

  2. Karma Gyeltshen says:

    thanx brother….if i share the fact behind this particular poem….i wrote this poem based on my real expeience, but also drew inspiration form one of the Dzongkha songs called…Fangyee Fangyee….so i combined my real experienced with the inspiration that i drew form that song to come up with this poem….

  3. sonam yangdon says:

    gone is gone and done is done so proceed to the next level karma..
    anyways great poem

  4. Phub Jigme Dorji says:

    life is like reading novel…u will never know what would happen next until you turn the pages.keep going..keep hope and keep the true heart..god sees the truth but waits karma…

  5. Karma Gyeltshen says:

    hi guys, thank you all for your comments and compliments